Oh so cute!
I love the idea of this!

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I love the first two lines. That idea is just so unique and so interesting. It's wonderfully described. I also like the title, it fits really well with the piece.

The only thing is the part in italics seemed a bit odd. I thought there should be a comma somewhere. Other than that great job!

"A silent admission to everyone else in the room." Sensual, captivating message.

i adore the innocence in this
and all the little grins i cn see in it.
i really like this.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,
gg