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Liviania 2009-08-20 . chapter 1
Just noticed the snippet here . . . I like it. Mundane scenes work so well for fleshing out characters. (I like to write mine doing laundry. How do they sort it? What sort of baskets do they use? Liquid or powder detergent? Brand name or generic? Softener? Do they do anyone else's laundry, or only their own clothes?)

And I just love that the pancakes are for dinner. ^_^

Livi
Jumping Jack Flash 2009-05-21 . chapter 1
A delightfully awkward moment, real as a snapshot. It made me grin from ear to ear.
Catseye*Rose 2009-05-08 . chapter 1
That was ridiculously cute. I love Lee. I'm rather impressed by Kaz's stomach o.o Those pancakes sounded...unpleasant. Guess he was hungry! Hm...I wonder where the rest of Lee's cigarette butts went...?
Shampain86 2009-02-04 . chapter 1
Holds plate up "MOAR PLZ?"

ILU.

You rock.

UPDATE SOON FOR REAL??

DOn'T PiSS OFF TeH GAY MaN.


Make him happy and he'll love you 4ever.
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