Epic. Turn on the light. I'm sounding like a broken record with you. It's pretty fun. In an annoying way.

This is good too I like the line, "I'm too broken, too full of tears that won't fall" completely know the feeling. I also like the part where it talks about being weighed down. Well done a lot said for a short poem.

Excellent! You really have a talent. I wouldn't worry about it being short, I think it adds to it.

aw... so real. most people experience..