 000LostInLove000 2009-03-04 . chapter 9Oh, god, this is so sad :(
This is an awesome story but i started crying on the first few chapters when Jackson died.
I can't wait till you write more please update soon ^ ^ |
 now-removed 2009-03-02 . chapter 9Thats sad but it makes sense. To Archer his whole life is over. Its like he only has a week to live, in his eyes. Can't wait to see what is in store for them. |
 BleedingLOVER 2009-03-01 . chapter 8I'm going to fucking cry: please update soon. |
 now-removed 2009-02-28 . chapter 8That was really extreme. The chapter was really good and I enjoyed your writing style but it was really sad and I feel bad for him.
And don't listen to any of those other comments bashing your story. It is really amazing and anyone with half a brain would enjoy it. And just as a note for some people gay is NOT a synonym for dumb. |
 000LostInLove000 2009-02-26 . chapter 8Aw! I hope Archer doesn't die! If two people that I loved had died like thta I would have killed myself. Poor guy...he just cant seem to hold onto anyone...Well anyways I loved this chapter and all the others as well. Thanx for writng these, they r amazing ^ ^ |
 000LostInLove000 2009-02-20 . chapter 6Woah, I love this story ^ ^ You should really write more I'm dieing to kno what happens :) |
 JimmyGray101 2009-02-20 . chapter 6loved it welldone :) |
 Me, Myself and I agree 2009-02-20 . chapter 1 Ok, this is GAY! and I mean gay as in dumb. SO is this guy like 16 years old and is in college? what a lucky cripple. And he's bf killed himself just cuz he was confused...what a pansy. Like this would actually happen in real life. Don't think I'm a hater cuz I'm actually pansexual, but this story is just downright gay. curse you. |
 M. Kailus 2009-02-19 . chapter 5 I misread 'closest' as 'closet' friends at first...anyway, that's irrelevant. I love how past tense is used to build tension...I was kind of looking forward to hearing the concert described though, it seemed like the cliffhanger of the last chapter. |
 M. Kailus 2009-02-19 . chapter 4 I'm get scared anytime this guy gets happy, haha.
Hm."It's not Archer was copying me or anything." should maybe be "It's not like..." methinks.
Anyway, I'm curious to see where this goes. |
 M. Kailus 2009-02-19 . chapter 2 I'm really loving the story, and the way you've integrated humor without derailing the seriousness of the plot. My favorite stories all do that, and you're showing good signs of it here. Keep it up! |
 now-removed 2009-02-18 . chapter 5I'm happy their relationship is progressing and is going really really good. But with the way you're writing it kinda seems something horrible is going to happen. Can't wait for the 6th chapter!! |
 xxsourgirlxx 2009-02-16 . chapter 2I love it. Keep writing, please! |
 JimmyGray101 2009-02-16 . chapter 4Look, all I have to say really is hurry with the next chapters because I absolutely loved the first 4, they're great and you're an amazing writer and i can't wait to hear more! :) I subscribed to you so I can get to see it faster. :) |
 now-removed 2009-02-12 . chapter 3I loved this story. I was really intrigued by it and I found myself not able to stop reading it. Archer sounds really cute. I can't wait to read what happens next. |