Review Marathon this weekend (link in my profile)!

"Like a black white movie."... black and white

I like the idea that though you guys are still physically together the things that made you a couple no longer are. That was a really great statement because it was so true and you illustrated it well with good examples.

Your similies are great and I like how you repeated the format. It worked well with the piece.

"We are still there...like an abstract art." Brilliant! Striking! Powerful!

The sky that isn't blue anymore,

the rose that isn't red anymore,

We are still there...

Like a black white movie.

That was my favorite verse, i think i know what it means, it's beautiful! Really cool idea!

Wann gründest du endlich eine Band? Ich höre den Song richtig in meinem inneren Ohr