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jezza3000 2009-10-17 . chapter 17
Ah another spell binding gay erotica fanfiction finished, it saddens me to watch this story end before my eyes... :( Excellent Job, i absolutely loved it - touched my heart :).

Keep up your fabulous work :)
AndItMovesUsAll 2009-08-13 . chapter 17
Whew, *blushes* those were some intense sex scenes :D
I really loved this, i can picture Alex and Step really clearly in my heaad, and i thought all of your characters were really interesting and unique, if a little disturbingly forward sometimes (jacob and his kissing pretty boys :D) I liked how you handled the whole in-love-with-the-best-friend-scenerio, it was very realistic, and you really built it up, i wasnt sure what was going to happen at the end. So yeah, this was a great read, cant wait to read more of yours!
Clazziquai Project 2009-07-24 . chapter 17
Wow, I really liked this story! I love Step! He's so cute! I'm glad Alex and Step ended up together, but I'm not gonna lie. I'm still ** that Alex made Step suffer and wait so long. Oh well, all is well that ends well. Is that how the saying even goes? Oh, idk it's late, and I'm tired. Amazing story though! haha
Allanasha Ke Kiri 2009-06-06 . chapter 17
Aw~ *sniffle* poor guys. You know .. I had been hoping for a threesome, but this is good too. Very cute. ^_^
violetdreamsofday 2009-06-03 . chapter 17
I'm so happy that Step and Alex ended up together.
:D They just belonged together.
:D
Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside.
violetdreamsofday 2009-06-01 . chapter 2
Awe... I feel so sad for Step. He's such a sweet guy. ): I wish I had a friend like him. He needs so serious hugs right now.
violetdreamsofday 2009-06-01 . chapter 1
OH.
:D
Me likey.
:D
Heehee I'm not sleeping tonight just cause I wanna finish this asap :D
Keep writing.
Jayn 2009-05-29 . chapter 17
How cute! What a wonderful ending! I really wish I could see those paintings. That would be awesome. Perhaps Step could title the last one now. ^_^

Great storY!
Jenna Whitefield 2009-05-28 . chapter 3
Alex, you are a prostitute...ha ha, kidding!

I love this, though right now, I'm seening like five differnt relationships and I really want to know who gets together with who!
xdinoxcorex 2009-05-24 . chapter 17
Aw, I love this story! All of the characters are so well developed, you can clearly picture them. Great detail with everything. Darrin did kind of like drop of the face of the earth after the first few chapters, but that's okay hahaha. Step and Alex were the main focus and they're amazing :)
portabellaprincess 2009-05-14 . chapter 17
I loved this story! Can't wait to read more by you. =]
big.break.and.laryngitis 2009-05-10 . chapter 2
Okay. So. I decided after reading the first chapter that this was either going to be wonderfully epic or horribly awful. And it seems to be shaping up to be the first. Let me read more. I'll get back to you on that, okay? So far, so good. Very good, actually. I like Step a lot. That's all for now.
Rinkika 2009-04-10 . chapter 17
Aww~! This was good. I'm glad everything worked out in the end, although I did sort of expect another relationship to form. Good job!
Celticfaerie13 2009-04-09 . chapter 17
Oh my god I officially LOVED this story!! Your characters are so beautiful and the sex scenes were extremely well written ; ) I was sad to see that none of the other boys hooked up- no Paul/Jacob, Darrin/Jacob? Paul especially I adored. Altho I definitely sense a past for Jacob- a former lover. Hmm. . .interesting.

Definitely keep writing : )
Royal Road Traveller 89 2009-04-08 . chapter 17
AH, OMG, I can't believe we've reached the end already! I'm so happy for Step and Alex... well, mainly Step. I'm glad he decided not to get on the plane. and Paul!! *grabs Paul and finds him a beautiful, bronzed, spanish artist to wait on him hand and foot and fulfil his EVERY whim* For being such a fantastic person.

Kudos!
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