this is so powerful and beautiful. i enjoyed reading this so much! great idea

"Is this clearness...a dream?" There's such a wonderful sense of serenity and peace here :)

The questions in the second and third stanzas are very thought-provoking! It makes the reader question their own beliefs, and that's refreshing! :)

"Perchance the voyage..." Nice word-choice!

A powerful poem. The first line is perfect - it really drew me in.