This is getting good, so I'm going to be waiting for more :)

~Lex

Ah, another good chapter, nice work. I really like how you conveyed the emotions of the characters in this chapter as well as your talent with dialogue. I think you picked a nice way and place to end this chapter and I look forward to seeing where you will pick it back up. Again,k nice workw ith this, I look forward to reading more.

Aww, man! Daniel!
I sense that Jenna meant a lot more than just being a childhood best friend. I feel sad for Daniel.

Keep up the awesome job!

Wow.
It's so intriguing!
I can't wait for more! Keep up the awesome work!

This promises to be very interesting. I look forward to seeing where you take this story - Nice work.