I'm still your reader!

Interesting. This sounds smilar to my story Eleria.

Wow! Very exciting! I'm really happy you decided to finish this and I can't wait till the next chapter!

Good chapter and hm, what does the name Amidala remind me of? Oh yeah, Star Wars! Ah well, anyways update soon and I like the ending. It was funny. P Blaze

Denne historien her er også kjempe bra!

Jeg er nesten helt sikker på at du kommer til å utgi bøker når du blir stor :D:D

Oh how I hate cliff hangers! Though I do a few of my own you know.

I really enjoyed this. I feel invested in the Princess, I am rooting for the Queen, although, I think her time is limited. I am already afraid of Nightmare.

I can't wait to see how the Princess is introduced to Earth and Sarah Parker.

I'm very impressed!

Keep it up, you have a real talent for writing!

It was really good. Cant wate for the next chapter. Really good language.

It seems good, good for your first! I would advise to make sure that all main characters are not female, as then it would seem like there are quite few males on these planets...(Unless that's the truth...:))

Very nice!

OH! My kind of story! I'll keep reading!

More details please. How does the planet of Faledon look like? Is is green and luxurious or stony and coarse? Despite that, it is very interesting and suspenseful. Please keep it that way. I want more!