Harsh and strait to the point, but oh so beautiful. Bravo, that was very well done.

Wow, great poem.

Perfect way of conveying how only part of one's self is shown to others while the other part remains hidden. It's good for the Hurt/Comfort genre. You're an excellent poet. Wonderful!

Wow seems an inadequate word, you write such powerful poetry. It's always a joy to read. I can picture the happy person completely as I can picture the wounded one. Two halves of a whole. I've known people like this. I feel for this person. excellent job

I really like this poem. It shows how much there can beneath someone who seems like another. ]

Somehow, I can relate. It has a nice repetition and keeps a flow going through the poem.

Keep writing!

Oh my god, I don't know if I can take it to read your poems. They reach right into me and rip my heart out. It is like you were standing beside me while I went through some of my worst moments and penned them down perfectly. Once again, you have captured perfection.

Amazing... Simply amazing. I love it! Sounds much like me. Adding to favs