Oh wow. To meet like that simply by chance. You have satisfied my romantic side for now though! Oh I just loved this.

this story is different. you have some talent, i'm telling you

Great! I loved it! Very sweet!

Too sweet! I love it!

For a second, I thought he really wasn't going to show up! Thanks for sharing!

Amazing story! Compared to the other chapters, it did seem to be a bit short, but you still captured the right amount of emotion and it was still consistent with the other chapters. You are definitely one of my favorites authors!

wow! what an amazing story! i absolutely loved it. :)and i love the way you write. ;)

i love this story. its cute and short but it had such a connection...emotionally. anyhow i like the way you write and you deserve alto more reviews than you have received. I'm not one to review either but this was really great so i decided to. Keep doing what you're doing )

i like the complexity of their relationship

this story is so sweet! i love it so far!

Your writing is delightful! I'm so glad I stumbled upon you by chance. :)

Wow, this is really nice. I love the random moments of profound sentimentality... it makes me think. And if nothing else, it looks pretty on the screen.

I guess that the situation could be considered cliche by the more cynical readers on this site, but regardless, I feel as though you've managed to handle it in a way that isn't the typical 'oh-I-met-you-I-love-you-I'm-leaving-you' story.

So yeah, I'm really enjoying it and your style of writing, although I have noticed a couple of typos here and there. :-)

I thought this story was absolutely adorable. It was kind of cliche, but I would love for something like that to happen to me. These kinds of things are more exhilirating than true, long love, I believe.

It was a refreshing and cute story. Good job.