alright. i'm really loving the story. but i'm just so sleep right now that i'll read the last two chapters tomorrow.

uh oh. trouble in paradise?

love it! although that was really up and down loll seemed the most...unstable i guess...story you wrote in concerns to like plot and stuff with all of its good then bad then good then bad. not in a bad way though

I think that a story about Morgan and Owen should be written. It'd be classic b/c Irelyn and Bailey think that Owen is a creep, player, and pretty boy, but shy morgan could bring the best in him out.

So it's three in the morning, I have to pee like a flippin' racehorse (but I didn't want to stop reading) and I've just finished this entire story. I loved it. More than loved it. Like it was fan-fucking-tastic, in my opinion. But I could be biased...because you're awesome as an author. Question: how the hell do you crank out stories the way you do? That's what I want to know lol

Anyway, I loved it, I plan to read more (tomorrow) and now I really have to go pee lol

Great job!

Mia (your crazy friend)

Nice, loved it. Bailey and her perspective on her friendships reminds me of.. well me. Morgan is like a friend of mine and I, too, am always put out to be the bad guy.

Not sure I liked the ending, but everything else was good

too cute! Great story, great plot!

I was surprised that the sequel was about Bailey and Collin geting together but I think it was a perfect choice. I really enjoyed the story, can't wait to read more from you.

aw. Please keep the banging your head on the laptop to a minimum. Don't want to break anything! & lol at the start of your A/N... do you really hate this chapter that much?

There was one line in here that I think you should look at...

"I remember a time when I never thought I’d feel this way yet here I was doubting I could ever live with him."

I'm pretty sure it should say... ever live WITHOUT him. I don't know, I just had to read it a couple of times because it didn't sound right. Maybe I'm just reading it wrong.

Well, I liked the epi. Aw. My favorite line, "Who really cared if I was going soft – Collin was well worth it." aww. How sweet. I want a Collin! or ( .) a Craig! haha. I think I've become obsessed (in a nice way?) with him. Especially since I've decided that he has a Scottish accent like James McAvoy. *brain montage of James McAvoy talking* ahaha.

lol. Spencer with his fake tears. oh! & I kind of like that we didn't really find out in the end if Morgan and them became friends again. It kind of leaves it up to us. If we liked her and if we didn't, we get to come to our own conclusions.

ahaha. I had a moment of pure dumbness. Well, I have a lot of those but... that's not exactly the point right now. :P I was reading the beginning of the chapter when Collin says, “I’m going to let the dog out..." & I thought YAY! Finally everyone's going to tell the truth about everything. hahah. Silly! I was thinking about letting the "cat out of the bag" but he meant LITERALLY taking the dog out. haha. Dumb. :P

ha! What would the world be without cheese? Cheeseless nachos. Cheeseless cheeseburgers! *gasp* NO CHEESECAKE! eh. I don't really like cheesecake anyway. & There wouldn't be anything to go 'aaww' over. lol. yay for Collin and Bailey! They can have cheesecake.

...what about Craig? hehe. In my mind he goes off to Scotland! yeah! ... and that's where the story ends because I don't have a very big imagination. :(

ah! OMG. Craziness. I'm glad she beat Owen up. I think he was genuinely scared of her when he was kicking everybody out of his club. lol.

hm. Morgan is a little frustrating. She didn't even want to hear what happened. *sigh* Geez, you're welcome Morgan! :P

Craig! *does a little dance* :D

“Bailey, if you do,” Collin said, his eyes dark and angry. “I swear…” *bangs head on desk* What? He swears... what?

ah! Craig! yay! He's awesome. & I feel a lot better now that Bailey won't be totally alone in this jacked up plan of hers (and Craig's). lol.

Why do people always eat eggs and bacon for breakfast? lol. This is random, but seriously! Why? I don't like scrambled eggs and I don't like bacon... I don't see the appeal. :P Maybe if it were eggs sunny side up... and maybe just one strip of bacon, I'd deal. Gosh, now I'm kind of hungry.

Aw. I really wanted to "see" Craig.

*pout* Collin scared him away.

No. No. No. Absolutely not. No. She can't mess things up with Collin. Can't she just have Tori talk to Morgan about what Owen did? Noo. Gosh, I'm scared! okay, okay. Stay calm. Deep breaths. Maybe nothing bad will happen. Yeah. Positive thinking. Positive.

"...you and I would burn the sheets and start a fire." Oh goodness. Did he seriously just say that? *gag* Needles to say that I'm worried about Bailey's plan to get Owen away from Morgan. What can she do to keep the creep permanently away from all of them? ...I don't know. *pout* Maybe she should have some people on stand-by in case Jerkface tries something.

So cute. Those two. Together. aaw.

aha! I knew it! I knew it! *does a happy dance* lol. I hope I don't jinx anything. But I new there was something else between Tori and Collin than them liking each other. So he's helping her right? What's this about "there is more to her story "? Should I be nervous? No? Well, I will be anyway. :P

lol. I like Craig. I like saying Craig's name...with a Scottish accent. lol. It's funny because I was watching LIVE w/ Regis & Kelly this morning and they were talking about some Craig (I guess maybe they were talking about Craig Ferguson... IDK. lol) and then about the Scottish accent and how they roll the 'r'. & then bam! There's a Craig in this story. lol. oh! and then you said the word "Incidentally" in your A/N which is the word that Regis thinks he uses too much...

ANYWAY...What am I going on about?

What other twist is there? What's Bailey going to do with Owen. Which reminds me that it kind of sucks that his name is Owen because there's this cute doctor on Grey's Anatomy whose name is Owen. lol. & the actor is SCOTTISH! hahah. wow.