Very emotive, and the rhyming works well. :)

Brilliant. :)

"And I feel as if I'm floating through this life." This line is absolutely stunning-the hopeless/painful tone works so well here.

"Nobody seems to question the reddened skin that burns." I question! I question! Are you okay, m'dear?

"The petals flutter to the ground and shrivel in the sun." BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY! WOW! :D

these emotions are complicated but so true.

it sounds as if you're your own friend, anyway, great piece.

Better every time I read it :-) i love the line, "I hope my dear you're not afraid of heights," The patronising tone and the raw emotion are fantastic Beautifully written as always.

Ily x

"I cannot be free if my mind chooses not to misgive its memories." You must find a way to be at peace with your memories. As for you A/N, it's true, the only person who can really help you is yourself.

It was a bit of a shock to see you use the word "fuck" especially so early in a poem but I was glad to see that you did not use it gratuitously. It worked well and seemed the right word to use.

I really liked the last stanza as well. A well written poem all round.

Not a rhyme scheme commonly found on this site. A good choice, though, and you used it well.

"Or maybe I'll just shoot you first, and scream as if it's unrehearsed." This part flowed particularly well, and the message is dramatic and vivid.