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Reviews For: Paideia
Hehe-Blixie 2009-03-10 . chapter 2
i'm a little confused, whose POV is this story in?
Solielle 2009-02-06 . chapter 1
I like the way you write. It's simple and easy to read, and you seem to have a good grasp of your characters. :) I think it would be better to correct the grammar on your story summary, though - "Do you remember all the people you met when you were a child? What if you met the person again one day when you're an adult*?* *W*hat would you say to them? *W*ould you say anything?
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