 Solielle 2009-02-06 . chapter 1I like the way you write. It's simple and easy to read, and you seem to have a good grasp of your characters. :) I think it would be better to correct the grammar on your story summary, though - "Do you remember all the people you met when you were a child? What if you met the person again one day when you're an adult*?* *W*hat would you say to them? *W*ould you say anything? |