I love your story. It's a shame you might delete it! You are really awesome writer and I think you have a lot potential. I do understand where you are coming from I have abandoned stories myself, but I sometimes go back to them if I can. Writers block and lack of inspiration is royal pain, but you never know inspiration could come back to you at any given time. That's the way it usually happens with me.

Good luck with your writing endeavours!

Melissa :)

Very sorry to see you cancel this project, it felt like it had some real promise. I know what it's like to just lose inspiration part way through though (I've deleted partial fics of my own), hope you have some more ideas soon!

This might sound stupid to you but are you a real writter/author?

because you write almost if not exactly like other professinal (oops think i spelt that wrong) authors like mary downing hahn I hope to learn how to write proporly from you just by reading your fp storys I will check in often for Chapter 11 byee

Omnomnom! I like Saydi! She's my kinda chick!
But anyways.
That one part where they're fighting over "aint" and stuff is hilarious. xD
Beautiful chapter! :D

Oh a chase scene!
I like Ulric. He's awesome.
And that was 125 or whoever right?

Man I love this already.
Wonder what's gonna happen next!
*runs off to read the rest*

O.o interesting so far.
I wanna know what happens with 125(any time i say that it reminds me of Lelo and Stitch XD)and Draiden.

Gonna keep readin'!

Good story but this needs a T rating very much so.

Sorry Author but I agree with Draiden that he shouldn't be treated like a child and not told things.

Aw, now I actually feel bad for him. Poor kid. That would suck so much... I can't wait for him to meet Saydi though. :D

He's so...awkward. Its amazing!! And i love the description of the beer. Engine de-greaser, bottled and ready for consumption. Really looking forward to the rest of this.

Kelly is so sweet! And Ulric is a lot cooler when he drops the servant attitude. :D

It was cool to read from Ulric's point of view. He seems like a really nice guy. :D

This is frightening. This story is far to plausible to be comfortable. Very well done. I look forward to the rest of this series.

Interesting so far... It has my attention, certainly. I enjoy your descriptions!

Very intriguing. Just curious: would it be considered normal for Draiden to have a tracker in his head? Ursula guessed that right off the bat. (Or has that kind of thing just happened before...)

Good chapter! :D