I really enjoyed this chapter. It was a good length because I"ve got exams and can't be online for long so that's okay.

I felt you could have a bit more action-reaction going on between the dilogue.

Is Lily acting weird?? Does she know that Garrett Is the bad guy? Or is she just nice..??

Exciting! I really want to know what happens next! UPDATE!
Narq.

Yes, it has been a long time since you've reviewed, but I adore this chapter, it was lovely!

Miyako seems nice, I wonder why Garrett was staring too, but Cory was cute!! I like this chapter heaps!

GReat job!

Wow, this was one long chapter.
Nah, it was good.
I think you repeated the word "beet red" at least three times this chapter. Try to use something else.
Hm, I never knew doing that would hurt the guy!! (and don't they have health classes about using lub?) oh well..
it was good though, and I really liked this chapter because I could see you worked ** it.

Narq.

Oh ho~ that is fantastically done!
Too good to be true, you know? I loved this chappe soo much!!
Missed you~~

Narq.

HEYY WRITER!

I'M MISSING YOUR STORY ALREADY! Thank God you didn't end the story though, I'd feel really sad. The stoy is really really wonderful though I suggest you could use other words to replace state, whisper, command and said. It gets boring after a while... :x

But still, you're doing fabulously and this story seriously has substance in t. I'm glad you're till writin... writemore, okay? The first few chapters has more words than the recent ones... or so I feel. :)

God bless. Hope thisis not taking up a alot of your time. You're a good writer! God loves you..

From A FRIEND

(P.S. I love the part where you wrte that James and Ice Queen Elizabeth need attend a church... ;D)

To: you!

Hey, writer, good job! I'm totally in love with your story... :)

From: a friend.

" handle James"? LOL! I loved the way you did 'handle', like he wasn't a person or somthing.
This was a good chapter and I really enjoyed this one. I think this is one of your best.
Narq.

I must say that this is one of your best chapters yet! The action was all flowing together and I held my breath in my chest and couldn't move until the very unitl and poor beth was crying.
How could Ryou be so mean? You're a great writer, putting in plot twists like that!
Narq.

Elizabeth Anderson is BACK! O.O
YAY!

Hello, saw this from Bnovel but decided to review here too.

This seems interesting, even if you have some errors [like missing punctuation, spelling, repetition]. Ways of the samurai Ice Queen, huh?

Keep it up. I'll read more when you update on Bnovel since there's no 403 over there. :P

It seems that Ryou is trying to get Beth against James so they are weak and he could get the Dragon Masters sword somehow. I liked Ryou in the beginning but I don't like him anymore now. I hope James and Beth are okay soon.

GREAT CHAPTER! Sniff...
I woke up this morning thinking that I hadn't read your stories for a long time - then I opened my email and voila! there were two cute stories for me to read!

Hey, this was a really good chapter. It was a bit ladden with speech though...

Oh~ There are more! I can't wait! This is so exciting!
I will check out your new story if you check out mine (Cryptic Paths)~ haha, just kidding, I'm going to check it out right now!!

This is a very nice chapter. I especially enjoyed the part with Cory. But I think you should do a bit more on him - now that you've mentioned he's overprotective, SHOW he's overprotective. Make him be like that. It'll be interesting~
Keep writing!