Nice.

That boy was me. The rhyme is from Mother Goose?

These are hilarious XD. I look forward to more!

Cute :)

It's Little Miss Muffet eh? Clever idea for an assignment :)

I think you did well, I liked the theme of the poem. We can all relate to computer crashes!

I liked your closing line too, lol. I think it's valid. A computer crash can certainly carry his whole life (files, documents, photos, music) away. Happened to me.

Good job

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I like the idea here. The assignment you were given was interesting and I think what you came up with worked perfectly. It creates a nice contrast between childhood nursery rhymes and the modern world.

The only thing is the word flash didn't really make too much sense. Computer don't usually flash before they crash at least not that I know of. It seemed a bit forced with the rhyme. Other than that nice job though.

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haha little miss muffet. clever. this was a very cool assignment and you did a good job with it. well done.

It's Little Ms. Muffett. I like it!

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clever!

[Little Miss Muffet]

I loved it ]]

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little miss muffet right? hahaha