o. very exciting. love the play btwn the characters. will come bak when u update but i know ur very busy (-grins widely-) very excited 2 c the whole rigid-ness of each click and where Kayden stands in Bailey's eyes...o

Bahahaha! :D

I loved it!
I love Kayden's personality.
Allen and Kayden seem to be interesting together!
I like the story line a lot.
Great story overall. Keep it up!

:)

~Kimiko

the story is unique and has a fresh start..., sui like the way the characters are describe, so please update soon. sui also found some mistakes and wrong grammar but really very little..., and all in all it's very good. Kayden uses Riana right? So why did she use that name instead of her real name? Pen name or something? Sui just wanna know, oh well... and sui will be a goodie good girl and will wait for the next update from kakgirl-san...