I'm also wondering about the box. You better work on the other story now LOL. I think that the tenses were fine. I applaud you for writing about topics like amnesia and spies, they are quite hard to relate to but yet intriguing. Keep the updates coming.

I'm interested! Just.. confused is all.

I actually have amnesia, that's why I'm so interested. Can't remember anything that happened before last year.

I am curious, but at the same time I want the rewrite. Aggh. Cant you do both simultaneously and spend time on nothing else? ;) I don't know.
Alex