Why this hasn't got 100 reviews is beyond me..

Thre title really suited the content. Loved it.

Yup, I heard the Classics are great!-fake smile-

But I just don't know why-WHY?-I die of boredom just from reading the first page?

I don't have a lot of patience!

Nice one! Love the story..!

I find it a personal pet peeve when I get stats listed out. I don't need full names in oneshots (unless they come into relevance) or random irrelevant facts.

Also, "but Nat loves him as much as she loves her beat-up car Sasha, which is pretty much undying." While it gets the point across, it is a misplaced modifier. It sounds like Sasha is undying, not Nat's love for Sasha.

I'd also like to point out that Nat would not refer to Lydia's Mom as Mom.

Other than that, I did really like this. It was quirky but cute, and definitely on the cliche site, but cute. I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2.

This is cute. Makes me smile and somewhat deliriously happy. I enjoyed reading this a lot. ;)

Thanks for the story.

aw how cute! )

Cute story! Good job. I enjoyed reading it, but I do have to agree with you. It isn't really one I enjoyed reading a lot.

Still, I enjoyed it. Just not as much as I usually enjoy other stories.

Keep on writing

Very cute. Brilliant work :)

I loved this! (I'm SuperNinjaPriya from the SkoW forum, by the way) Zach makes me smile, and I really liked the style it was written it.