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This was cute :)

I really liked your opening line. It was a good attention grabber and made you want to read the rest of the story.

I liked how you inserted humour in the list of things he was afraid of. A few of them made me chuckle: Purple and choker necklaces :)

Sweet ending too.

Nice job

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Those are a lot of things to be afraid of. Hmm. Sweet ending. I like them, those boys. They seem sweet.

i don't normally read slash, but i liked the summary so i just had to click it.

i think it gets a little old at the end, because it just seems like you're listing everything you can think of. although cute, it's kind of tedious, and i didn't really like the paragraph where things would "freak him out."

despite that little nitpicky ness, i thought this was cute, and that in the end, jamie was the one comforting shane, even though he's scared out of his mind

This was really nice, and I think it got a good point across. Jamison is scared of a lot of things, but when it comes to the person he loves the most, he'll be brave.

And I'm sorry, but some of the things he's scare of made me giggle :)

I really enjoyed it. I thought you created a real, authentic character in an extremely short time. (And I throughly agreed with many of his fears) :)

It was a cute ending too.