Great ending!

I like the way you twisted this at the end. Not sure if I liked the characters of Ella or Georgina, but of course that's the whole point!

A well written take on a story that had seemingly been done to death, yet you found a slightly new angle to explore so top marks.

Spawny

And so we come towards the conclusion. Is Ella going to be happy with her life as a queen? Or is she going to grow bored with sitting and waving at people?...

I sense one final twist before the end of the tale...

Spawny

I like the way that things have developed in this tale...

We have the wicked step-mother, which is, of course, a given in this type of tale...

We have the 'fairy godmother' which is really just a jealous relative playing one-upmanship...

And we have the beautiful heroine of the story, who is revealed as a headstrung, but still, ultimately, spoiled brat...

Clearly, the moral of this story is that all women are untrustworthy liars!

Spawny

A good update, and I for one am glad to see you are keeping going with this tale. Also nice to see a longer chapter after the last couple...

Keep up the good work!

Spawny

These last two chapters are very short. I'm guessing there may be some apathy on your part thinking that you're writing for a non-existent audience, which is a big shame.

I like this tale a lot, and hope to see longer chapters coming along soon.

Spawny

This chapter could do with some editing, as there are a number of typos and some pretty poor grammar in places.

It appears that I'm the only person reading this tale, which is a shame, as it's a good, well written (mostly) take on an old tale.

Spawny

This is coming along well. I really like the way the characters have been developed so far, along the traditional lines but with a definately more readable style than the original tale...

Spawny