Aw that's so sad; he didn't get the girl he loved. Fantastic job though. You're great at poetry. I usually like to just skim through poetry when I'm reading it, but yours kept my eyes glued to every bit =) Keep it up!

-Gabbie

Prett good poem. Storage might be a good place to put impossible dreams in.

~SirScott

That was lovely. I liked the part about the snow. well done.

I absolutely love your poetry, this character is so fascinating...