Hehehe..exchange..

Gah! It sent before I was ready! What was I saying...?

Oh, yeah - at first I thought she changed character too quickly at the end, but then I read it through again and realised how perfect it was! And I LOVE her personality! (I can't believe I thought she'd kiss him just to keep up a reputation, lol. Consider me to be officially ashamed. :P )

But, yes - fantastic interaction between characters. I love the way you mentioned characters like Lina and Thomas so little but still gave a really strong impression of their personalities - AND you drew on them later in the story! Epic! :D

Realistic, funny and beautifully written. Are you working on any 'aiming to publish' stories? Because you should! ^_^

:)

Brilliant idea, really original and sweet. I thought Elizabeth changed opinions a bit too quickly at the end, but then

One word: Aw.
Oh, crud. That isn't even a word. Haha.
Seriously though, this one-shot reduced me into a pile of fluff. My favorite line: "I. LOVE. YOU. Stop laughing!"

Gawd, I wish I had a Clark when I was 11. Maye I should open my own kissing booth? Hahahaha.

I completely love this!

Great story : ]

awmes lol

loved it.. .

made my heart clench just reading it..
haha..

Cute...love it!

Ri

aw

Whoa, what a pain Clark is! Although he's a cute one. Very interesting one-shot =D Very smart of you :]

xD Ice cream and Kissing booths and irratible boys xD very Hilarious story! Totally a GREAT author keep Writing! Make some longer ones!

Okay.. that must be some fancy brand of ice cream if it produced that one-shot :D
Lovely piece. Hilarious too.

Sukanya

Hehe, this is adorably cute. Gah, I can't read a whole lot of stuff like this because it becomes depressing. Why you may ask. Well because it doesn't always work out like that in real life. In real life, sometimes boys tease you just because they are evil children. lol.

But this is really cute, and I enjoyed it. You should have entered it into a short story contest or something. It's nice to see the interaction, and you were able to do that in a small amount of words. It could still make a great book if you elaborated more on it, but for now it's also good.

yay!! Favorite **

Ohmygoodness, that was so freaking cute. :D

Ah a cute story~