 xxXNightsareDaysXxx 2009-11-09 . chapter 1Hehehe..exchange.. |
 hurrybee 2009-11-04 . chapter 1 Gah! It sent before I was ready! What was I saying...?
Oh, yeah - at first I thought she changed character too quickly at the end, but then I read it through again and realised how perfect it was! And I LOVE her personality! (I can't believe I thought she'd kiss him just to keep up a reputation, lol. Consider me to be officially ashamed. :P )
But, yes - fantastic interaction between characters. I love the way you mentioned characters like Lina and Thomas so little but still gave a really strong impression of their personalities - AND you drew on them later in the story! Epic! :D
Realistic, funny and beautifully written. Are you working on any 'aiming to publish' stories? Because you should! ^_^
:) |
 hurrybee 2009-11-04 . chapter 1 Brilliant idea, really original and sweet. I thought Elizabeth changed opinions a bit too quickly at the end, but then |
 CamrynMorrell 2009-11-03 . chapter 1One word: Aw.
Oh, crud. That isn't even a word. Haha.
Seriously though, this one-shot reduced me into a pile of fluff. My favorite line: "I. LOVE. YOU. Stop laughing!"
Gawd, I wish I had a Clark when I was 11. Maye I should open my own kissing booth? Hahahaha.
I completely love this! |
 DianaSweetie 2009-10-27 . chapter 1Great story : ] |
 ophelia 2009-10-26 . chapter 1 awmes lol |
 Sapphyre Nymph 2009-10-20 . chapter 1loved it.. .
made my heart clench just reading it..
haha.. |
 balloonfista 2009-10-03 . chapter 1Cute...love it!
Ri |
 A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-09-19 . chapter 1aw |
 ChocoResha 2009-09-02 . chapter 1Whoa, what a pain Clark is! Although he's a cute one. Very interesting one-shot =D Very smart of you :] |
 TiggerGurl 2009-08-05 . chapter 1xD Ice cream and Kissing booths and irratible boys xD very Hilarious story! Totally a GREAT author keep Writing! Make some longer ones! |
 sukanya 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Okay.. that must be some fancy brand of ice cream if it produced that one-shot :D
Lovely piece. Hilarious too.
Sukanya |
 Ruby Kart 2009-07-10 . chapter 1Hehe, this is adorably cute. Gah, I can't read a whole lot of stuff like this because it becomes depressing. Why you may ask. Well because it doesn't always work out like that in real life. In real life, sometimes boys tease you just because they are evil children. lol.
But this is really cute, and I enjoyed it. You should have entered it into a short story contest or something. It's nice to see the interaction, and you were able to do that in a small amount of words. It could still make a great book if you elaborated more on it, but for now it's also good.
yay!! Favorite ** |
 YoungInside 2009-06-12 . chapter 1Ohmygoodness, that was so freaking cute. :D |
 Demeterr 2009-06-04 . chapter 1Ah a cute story~ |