| Reviews for the frat boy |
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simpleplan13 3/2/09 . chapter 1I like this. The title is nice because it adds a bit more information to the piece. I also think your description of your reactions is really great and I like the ending. I think it's very realistic. The person would just pretend they hadn't met the boy before, but in fiction quite often the person would stand up. So it's different, which is nice. |
The True Dreamer 2/13/09 . chapter 1I really like the poems that tell a short story and this does just that! Wonderful! |
sunday night sky 2/11/09 . chapter 1lol - I love the beginning 'he extends his hand, a shit-' made me laugh. i really like this! even though we don't have 'frat boys' i've seen enough american films to know their type! i love how you casually build up the story - he's met you before, doesn't recognise you, you just play along. nicely done ] |
RandoMaia 2/9/09 . chapter 1Aah, I keep forgetting that the review box is no longer the review box... well, as I was saying: oof, this cuts, and I like it. |
luv me like no other 2/9/09 . chapter 1how very true. hahahaha. what a stereotypical frat boy. |