Absolutely amazing. I wish I wrote like you do. You're incredible in fiction and fanfiction.

I really liked how yo wrote the emotions in your story. It just seemed so... real and reliable. I could definitely see a famous woman feeling this way and suffering this much.

Actually, this character reminds me of Sorrow from "The Air I Breathe". And the relationship slightly resembles the one she had with Pleasure. Have you seen this movie or had it in mind when you've been writing it?

Anyway, keep up the good work and write more good stories. Like this one or the ones from the "iCarly" fandom ;)

-Oll

P.S. Sorry if my English isn't perfect. I'm Polish and I'm still learning ;)