great stared hope to see the nexts one soon
i fell for Shaun
is Jesse the werewolf?

I like this story so far, your characters always seem so real and not just perfect mary janes. can't wait for more.

I like this, a lot. The scene where she discovers her father's body was terrifying! It was really tense, and I kinda knew it was coming, but wasn't sure... Awesome job =)

Interesting start. I'm waiting to see where it goes. Please update soon!

whoa this is getting interesting :D

Interesting development from the first chapter. I like her name and his demeanor. I really hope you write more!

That's an awesome first chapter. Hope to read more soon~!

I am guessing this poor story is as dead as her father, oh well, it was a good beginning.

I will hold out hope for an update :P

It's dark and I like it. Can't wait to read more. X

This is really interesting! I hope you update soon! =]

I love this story so far, I cannot wait until the next update.