|Reviews for Rhyme|
| simpleplan13 3/8/09 . chapter 1
Interesting comparisons. I like them. I'm not sure about the title though because it doesn't rhyme.
| Isca 2/16/09 . chapter 1
"You left my heart like a hole." A very sad final line. This poem was short and sweet.
| XxZebbie-CullenxX 2/14/09 . chapter 1
So short but so powerful. I liked the last line a lot :)
| Lilja Ruusu 2/10/09 . chapter 1
Short and simple! it was cute and i loved the line 2, it reminded me of those doodles people draw when their bored or tuning someone out, so like ignoring someone...
| Black Lotus Flower 2/10/09 . chapter 1
Aw. It was a short but meaningful poem. Even just those few words say so much. Good job!
| Erlkoenigin 2/10/09 . chapter 1
Sehr schönes Gedicht. Gerade die Kürze ist bemerkenswert