Interesting comparisons. I like them. I'm not sure about the title though because it doesn't rhyme.

"You left my heart like a hole." A very sad final line. This poem was short and sweet.

So short but so powerful. I liked the last line a lot :)

Short and simple! it was cute and i loved the line 2, it reminded me of those doodles people draw when their bored or tuning someone out, so like ignoring someone...

Aw. It was a short but meaningful poem. Even just those few words say so much. Good job!

Sehr schönes Gedicht. Gerade die Kürze ist bemerkenswert