Great story. The writing is amazing

Wow, great writing. What exactly is this style of writing called? I loved how simple you were in describing what was taking place. I myself tend do alot of detail which ive learned isnt always great. Again, good job!

Avery interesting way to write and very well done. I like this for the simplicity of it. You didn't clog it up with heaps of deatils, which worked with this.

Well done.

RW