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PassionsFlame 2009-03-06 . chapter 2
Really liking the start. Hope to read more.
CanadianCookie 2009-02-11 . chapter 1
Hehehe, good job on your first story! Speaking of firsts, this is my first time reading shoujo-ai. One mistake;
"Without a second thought Ichiko looked at the clock. which read about twenty-five minutes until seven."
sounds awkward. Either you change the period into a comma or you reformat the sentences. Meh, it's probably a typo! ^^
Animate84 2009-02-11 . chapter 1
I have not seen many shoujo-ai stories here. So I am intrigued with this.
And I like how this relationship is turning comedic wise.
This has potential if continued and expanded.
BTW, Welcome to Fictionpress!
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