Very interesting. I think I like the methods and themes of your stories. I think a full story could be churned out of the themes you write about. This story was very intriguing and I liked the way it built up until the final statement.

No complaints here. It would have been interesting to know more about the main character who was watching the events, but the main character wasn't necessarily the focus. Good job.

This was just lovely!

I love how you tell this unknown man's story from a future tense, so that I (the reader) know that it hasn't happened. I thought this kept the story very clear and didn't muddle the fact that she was creating a tale for the man.

I also loved that conclusion. Very nicely done! I was tense through the whole story, thinking there might be a traffic accident or something, or that I'd be left an unfulfilled reader when he went about his business not addressing the Jeep. Then the ending came, and it was quite the welcome surprise.

Great job!

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