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Dramatizer 2009-02-14 . chapter 3
Timeline turned bit confusing, but you wrapped it up nicely. A good ending.
Dramatizer 2009-02-12 . chapter 2
Chimneys send out the smell of dinners by the time I chopped and stacked more than half the wood that my brothers had left laying around the yard.
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Wouldn't it be "by the time I've chopped"? Since it's present tense and all.

“Her parent’s learned from that mistake though,” she continues
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Parents, right?

So there's only one chapter left? Oh no. D: Well, I really liked the change in perspective.
Dramatizer 2009-02-11 . chapter 1
I saw no mistakes (although it's pretty late and I'm tired). I love the way you write. And this will be added to my Alert-list. Of course.
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