 Dramatizer 2009-02-12 . chapter 2Chimneys send out the smell of dinners by the time I chopped and stacked more than half the wood that my brothers had left laying around the yard.
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Wouldn't it be "by the time I've chopped"? Since it's present tense and all.
“Her parent’s learned from that mistake though,” she continues
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Parents, right?
So there's only one chapter left? Oh no. D: Well, I really liked the change in perspective. |