Very cool way to describe life. NICE!

Like a song... sometimes, the spectators wont even notice the errors. _

I really like the idea of comparing life to a piano and the main message of "keep moving on".

So good. I loved how it flowed so nicely.

Very good! I like how you relate playing a piano to life, very nice and poetic (which is good, since it's a poem). Well, other than the obvious stuff i'm pointing out, It was very good and you should be proud of yourself, Peace