Wow, this was good. I couldn't tell from the story that you were experiencing writer's block. Good luck on getting your inspiration back! It probably doesn't help you any, but I think this story is great :) Walkonair

I'm so glad you are back! I miss this story!

Love the drama and can't wait to see what Ryan does to Hugo!

Fast paced chapter and I loved that. A lot happened but everything didn't just get solved and swept under the carpet (I like that, too). I love Ryan.

Glad you're back - I missed this story. Now I'm off to read the new one.

So good to have you back and it's also nice to see Ryan and Saida trying to mend fences. Still worried about Saida's last gig, but all in all, very nice chapter.

OK, I really don't get why you don't have more reviewers. Your stories are awesome! There are VERY few good writers on this site - some I have to grit my teeth just to read a few paragraphs before I give up. Anyway, you are one of my favorites.

I have been trying really hard not to start reading unfinished stories, but I gave into temptation this time and now I'm hooked. I'm just glad I read it now instead of a couple of weeks ago. Hopefully you are nearly done with your hiatus??

Anyway, I look forward to the rest of this story and I put you on my alerts.

This was a good cahpter! I liked how Saida yelled at him. He deserved it! i hope you can work everything out! :)

Hi! I'll be waiting when you get back. I hope things get better for you soon. Take Care!

I've been reading this story for a while, and I really like it. Your writing isn't polished, but it's still good. I think that you made Ryan and Kayla's breakup a bit too quick, but other than that your plot is nicely organized. Although this will sound weird/stalkerish and I have no idea what's going on in your life, you'll be in my thoughts and prayers simply as 'that CaughtInASimpleGame gal'. I hope everything turns out okay --although real life isn't always like that- and that the hiatus is brief. Good fortune be with you!
Sincerely, Walkonair

I love it and I hope he kicks Chris's and Hugo's asses! And Johnny is still so hot (sigh).

Time for lunch and POST MORE SOON!

EEk. Well, at least we're partially mended. That's better than nothing. But Chris? Really? Not that idiot again. I'm not going to lie, I really want to see some punches thrown. Haha. No worries, I'll just go watch Gladiator to placate my violent needs. Haha.

Great work! I can't wait to see how the rest of the story shapes out! Keep it up!

I liekd this chapter! And I enjoyed Sophie's snap because that is how I reacted!! Good job, can't wait for the update!! :)

This was a really good chapter. I love the brother-sister scene, it was very heart-warming, I was close to tears. And I really loved Sophie for telling Ryan off. But what Johnny said was true, he needs to get his act together. And, it did appear too easy for Chris to let Saida off the hook like that. Will definitely keep my eye on that Chris guy.

Hehe I cheated. I signed in so I could review again. Actually, I signed in to vote in your poll and I had to sign in for that. But, I wanted to announce that I am the first voter!

Okay, back to work (great chapter)

I love Johnny. I was all ready for him to explode and was ecstatic when he didn't. What a sweetheart! Too bad he's already married and, well, not real.

Hurry with the next chapter.