|Reviews for Rotations|
| GirlWithTheBrokenSmile 2/12/09 . chapter 1
Like it:) Nicely done, and I'm glad you're trying something different. It came out beautifully.
The only thing I would change is the second line. The word "can" seems a bit redundant and needlessly repetitive after the first line. Maybe you could exchange the second "can" with "possible"?
Just a suggestion:)
Keep it up, 'cause you've got what it takes:)