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GirlWithTheBrokenSmile 2/12/09 . chapter 1Like it:) Nicely done, and I'm glad you're trying something different. It came out beautifully. The only thing I would change is the second line. The word "can" seems a bit redundant and needlessly repetitive after the first line. Maybe you could exchange the second "can" with "possible"? Just a suggestion:) Keep it up, 'cause you've got what it takes:) |