I like how you developed the relations between the characters before launching them into a relationship.Not fond of the poetry but I will tell you every time Katie says "woohoo" I imagine the pilsburry dough boy.LOL Anywho thumbs up.

Whe, now all he needs to do is come home and everything will be all better.

I totally remember this part! I felt so bad for Katie, so maddly in love and can't even see it, yet... Quit bothering her dammit!

Calm before the storm aye? Hm, now I'm even closer to the edge... -backs up- I must keep a close eye on that edge.

Yes, I have a little time to continue my review game! Who know it would take stupid four hour long testing for me to get free time (and a Headache).

fantastical! i am so impressed with the way you write i don't think i have the words to actually express it! i went straight from story 1 to story 2 and am going on to story 3 once i'm done with this! i'm so in love with Lucas and Katie and how you took them through from his transformation to hers! AND they're both long stories with long chapters, major double-plus in my book! i like how it didn't get overdramatic the way some stories tend to be, and that just made it seem all the more life like. can't wait to see what happens in NYC! xox

oh, I'm 19. I know what bases are, I just don't exactly know which ones are which. first base is nothing major, but I don't know if it's hugging or kissing. you said that lucas and katie are on 2nd base but to me, it seems a little extreme for katie.. so I just want to if your version of the bases are the same as mine. I also want to know this so I don't get confused anymore when I read about it.

anyways, good job on your story. I'm starting to read the last installment of the series. it's awesome, keep up the good work.

P.S. I personally like longer stories, Which is why I really like the ones you write. :)

A while ago I first read your series and I am very excited that you've started writing the third installment.

Recently I've been depressed, like clinicaly depressed, and reading your story has really made me feel so much better about my self. It truly is a feel good story, filled with humor, love, and fantastical characters. So I just wanted to let you know that your story has helped me through this tough time in my life. Thanks.

your story reminds me a lot of Twilight. I think you need to change it and there's too much unnecessary conversation. You need to cut down your chapters, there's just a lot of useless things in it you know.
But great story, its headed in the right direction, though Katie has a lot of problems going on with her. She is quite cruel to Lucas and I'm surprised Lucas takes her shi** I don't think a guy would go to such great lengths to stay with someone has btter as her. In reality, they wouldn't.

this story was absolutly wonderful! I loved it so much. but I was just curious, what are the bases? o-o

The epilogue...was beyond words. It was just..great :d I know it sounds lame but it was really great and I loved it..can't wait to keep reading and find out what happens next.You did an amazing job :X

:jumping up and down: aww so sweet he is just...perfect? of too good to explain with words..i think that's better.I just loved this chapter it was amazing.

LOL Hilarious..celebrity...crazy people really need to get a life. loved the chapter.

Wow.LOL.:))

AW...that was cute and really funny:))