Really interesting. Granted, a few grammar mistakes, but over all very well written ^ ^ Keep Writing!

Hey, someone else writing about Modern Paganism. I think I owe you reviews, and I’m sorry it’s taken so long.

Just an opinion, and a hypocritical one because I do the same, but the opening could have benefitted from a bit more description as to where they were what they were doing. Although the announcement at the beginning did make me think school.

I’m not sure what I think about Cassandra though. She seems like a nice person, but a little bit too nice. I sympathise with her being bombarded by the media image of needing love to be happy though, and the fact that the love spell back fired. On the other hand I did like the fact that it wasn’t a happy, happy, magic solves all your problems ending.

There were a couple of mistakes, you missed a ‘y’ of the end of ready during the spell, but that was all.

lol, awe poor Cassandra. But she should have known better. Awesome story, and sorry it took so long to review it!! Write more soon, ok?

Oh, good concept, I like it - and I wasn't expecting that ending either!
Just a couple of things, spelling mistakes and stuff:

1. "so mote it be" I'm guessing so /must/ it be?
2. "“Oh,” Amanda complained. “Why not?”" she's not really complaining as such - maybe just find a different verb?

Other than that, however, I enjoyed it
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Nice. You're writing is slight amateur but keep writing, it'll get better :)
You developed the plot and you described a lot of things.
Good job.