Oh my. Sorry for what ever is happening aand good luck, we will miss you.

I just died on the inside T.T

(sigh) I love characters like Royce. Always causing trouble where their not wanted. I think most of those types of chracters are evident in my own writing. And how unexpected that he is a demon! I thought a candy king would be on the angels side! Great job!

Oh and soory, it's taking me so long to get reviews down. But it's only fifteen minutes at library PC each day.

Peace! (PEACE AND LOVE! PEACE AND LOVE!)

loveing this story can't wait for more x

ahh!! This story is totally yummy!
More needs to come! XD
Delineations . Alyona

Oh, I think Royce has just stolen my heart. (blushes). Hehe, Skye reminds me of one of my firends. Oh and I was looking at your deviantart sketches of them. Quaid's a cutey.

Peace. ^^

Great Story!
The Candy King is unique!
I hope to read some more soon.

Okay, I'm going to say two things.
One, I didn't notice two chapters in one day
Two, This is awesome.
I wonder whats going to happen now?
What is gonna happen?
Thanks
ImmortalIncarnate
*falls out of chair*

How interesting...

aw her and teague would be such a cute couple too bad there is no way to break the contract

i love this gooey cahpter with a fierce passion!
excellente!

Hah. I don't know if he's going to be jealous or mercilessly tease her. Hm.

There seems to be a bit of confusion in Quaid's weapon. At first you wrote that she grabbed some scissors off her desk, and then you said she held a pencil. You might want to choose one or the other.

Also, I guess when you were editing this you put in some corrections but there are some parts where there are written instructions like *change to a comma. Anyway, just stopping to point those things out. [:

Hola mi amiga! Como estas?
Translation: Hello, my friend? How are you? (I think...)
Hehe, that chapter was funny. But it's sad that Royce has to take her life. I like him a lot. I don't think he's evil... And I still like him even though he is...
So how are things? I believe it should be the middle of the night (?) there.

I'm sorry this is the first time I've reviewed, but I've just now caught up with the entire story, and I must say, I cannot wait for more! Oh this waiting is a terrible thing! I absolutely adore the characters you've created..especially the Candy King. Can't wait to see what he does next chapter...how cruel to leave such a cliffy! So, the plot thickens...poor Candy King noticed he has competition with Teague..thanks for writing :D