"and trust me, it ain't nice."... this line sounded really odd. It's kind of an odd way to describe shifting feet and the phrasing just seemed off. Plus the word nice is so cliched.

I did like the piece though. It's not your best, but it's really sweet, relateable and cute. Very fitting for Valentine's Day.

this is cute.
the rhymes weren't forced - they were very natural.
great job. (:

AWESOME! gah i love valentines day. ok so, great poem. write more. ur awesome.

This is adorable! Short and sweet; I love the rhyming, especially the last line.

I like this =] Cute! Is it Valentines Day already? Goodness me! ... *checks calendar* ah it is in two days... must go and buy pressies. ANYWAY, really like it! I especially enjoyed the rhythm and flow of the first four lines. Very nice indeed. x