"people don’t dance in the middle of crowded places or wear their clothes inside out"

this sentence runs fluidly and beautifully, with lovely imagery. all upside-down and delightful.

I like your stories!

thank you for the review. X

Like your other story, this one is equally as entertaining. It seems like the type of story that could be extended? But that would be up to you lol. Anyway, not a thing wrong with it. Good job xD