Very interesting.

Short, lol, but you get your point across.

I don't quite know what to make about this one, I love it but it's hard to make sense of because it's not like in your face obvious? I take it sort of like a way to describe life to death. I think it's very neat how you used wax, nobody ever really thinks about wax, they think candle or flower when writing something like this? Your transitions are very neat though, the wax becomes so much, and then you're ending, "nothing", it's just all really interesting and different.

I really like it! :)

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