It took me a while to figure that one out. Nice job!

I love this, it was short and sweet. You used the senses in a creative way. You let the reader interpret the meaning, and that is really cool.

I have to say I do not understand this piece at all. The contradictions confused me, honestly. I do like how you used the senses though.

I really like it! Itz prdy awesome.

I like your use of the senses, and the fact that you leave it up to the reader to interpret this poem's meaning.

I'm not sure about the meaning of this poem. Could you possibly explain it to me?

I loved this! It was cool how it wasnt like a super long poem, cuz if its too long than theres a lot of repeating and stuff...This was perfect, and it was beautiful!

schön widersprüchlich, einerseits sehe ich sie über allen Dingen schweben und andererseits bekommt sie doch alles mit, gefällt mir!