Oh wow. I just coincidently stumbled upon this story and I have to say, I'm very happy that I did. It's wonderfully written, I loved this thoroughly, from the beginning to the end. Very nice!

This was very, very well written. The detail was nice and the format was very tasteful and elegant for this type of story. My only problem is with the ending. Something must have happened during your posting because it shows the entire thing over again without paragraph spaces. I'd look into it because it's very, very confusing.