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Nightmareality 2009-02-13 . chapter 1
Not bad. I like that it's written as the old lady telling the story to a visitor. I think it was a little too objective, though. It seemed like she was telling a story just like any story, as opposed to telling about her entire family dying one by one, leaving her all alone. And I'm not sure how she'd know that her eyes get red when she's hungry, unless she sits in front of a mirror all the time. Anyway, overall, not a bad job.
lola 2009-02-13 . chapter 1
that was a bit random and strange... go hang out with little mike
DelightfullyDemented 2009-02-13 . chapter 1
Oh, that is CREEPY! It was disturbing, even though you knew it was coming, you almost didn't want to believe it. Nit-pick: "studing" should be "studying". I love it.
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