What the **?

HAhahah!

What the **?

Unexpected but I should have seen that.

Genius!

Sappy. Very sappy.

I want PAIN! I love PAIN! Angsty emo boys make the world go round!! Uh.

But I do love the story. Don't get me wrong. I love it.

Eh. I rescind my prior fantasy about the whole stepbrothers thing. Sorry. Nope.

But! I did notice a lot of typos in this chapter. It's not distracting from the story, but it is evident.

Maybe I'm a sicko, but O really want some stepbrother action.

haha.

Yum.

An ** plus a spunky little cutie? Perfection, I say.

I love angsty boys. it's hot! I want them to feel pain. Lots of pain.

Pain is good. It builds character and plot. Yay.

I'm the type of person to just type in my thoughts as reviews, so behold the power of stream-of-consciousness!

I want Ollie to remember!! Not remember your first sexual experience has got to suck. Seriously yo. It's almost as bad as... accidentally making out with a loser while drunk or hitting on your best friend's ex while drunk or sleeping with an STD infected dude without a condom.

Yeah. Losing the big V while drunk has got to suck.

Didn't you steal this from rose1710 on cause this same story was written a whole year before you even posted. Word for word. And if you are not the same author you ought to be ashamed of yourself. That is called plagiarism. I think I will report you. At least give credit to the original other. And no where on your page do you claim to be rose1710.

This is good but so very sad.

hehe loved it is there a sequel? does the beast ever truly learn to love?

weird ending, but totally cute story!
=]

*totally crying from laughter* This was a fantastic story, but the ending completely threw me for a turn. xD Hence the laughter-crying. xD Definitely original though! xD (I accidently typed "realistic"; obviously quite the opposite of what I meant. xD)

I loved it, fabulous job!

I'm so glad I found this story :) It's so amazing and different. I loved the ending, I was laughing so hard when he tapped his shoes together. lol.

Ollie was an adorable character. It's sad that he got raped (damn Tom!!) But I'm so happy that him and Connor ended up together!! They're so perfect for one another :)

Also, wondering if your planning on doing more fairytale stories? It seems like this ending sort of sets forth for a Beauty and the beast one? **fingers crossing** I'd love to read more!! Especially a beauty and the beast one :) So hopefully your going to write one!!

Anyway, just wanted to say, great story. I enjoyed it a lot!! I'm definitely looking foward to reading more of your stuff.

-eVil uNicorns-

I loved that ending! I so wasn't expecting a wizard godfather. That was a great idea! Are you going to write a story now with the idea of beauty and the beast? Whatever the case may be, I love your story and can't wait to read any of your future work!

so what now...are you going to do a beauty and the beast one? i would really like to see that...it should be pretty fun if you do...
i liked the unusual ending...thanks for a great story

Wow, a ‘week’ seems to go by much faster where I’m from. Hehe just kidding, I’m sure you had your reasons. And it’s an enormous chapter to boot!

I liked the ending; very fitting for the both of them. However, I read way too many ‘the blonde’s and ‘the dark haired teen’s. You should avoid using them excessively (only my opinion) ‘coz they’re way longer than ‘Ollie’ or ‘Connor’ xD

Couple confesses love – check
Have hot smex – check
Live happily ever after – pending , hehe

I like how Ollie is small but not cliché small. Not bony and whatnot, you gave him muscle, yippers. I love when authors decide ‘to heck with stereotypes; the world wasn’t built on them anyway’.

Will you look at that? Ollie’s best friend was the fairy godmother/person. And he’s borrowed Dorothy’s shoes xD Definitely did not see that coming. You totally made it fantasy right there. At least Tom got what he had coming. He had the ‘Beauty and the Beast’ coming, harhar. I’m sorry, I’m literally laughing my head off with the ending. So good. Quite clever of you to have the end of one fairytale lead into another. For now, Congratulations on a completed story!