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kkit 2009-07-08 . chapter 13
more plz
Midnights Scream 2009-07-08 . chapter 13
wow. end in aboout five chapters? Hm. lol. It's not good that they suspect Damien to be the siren. I'm curious who it could be though. Kevin is a cutie. I think Angel is reacting badly. Damien might have left him alone, but didn't Angel basically live alone before damien and survive? Great job! p.s. Yes, Vampires Are Easy is on this site. :) thanks for reading it!
Lerene 2009-07-05 . chapter 13
Hmm, now I'm really curious who the Siren is
Midnights Scream 2009-07-03 . chapter 12
WOW! Siren attacking Damien! I think. I didn't think Damien was a merman, but I'm a little disappointed that he's a vampire. I was thinking more of a were or forest spirit perhaps. The mom thing is weird and kinda creepy. :) good job!
Midnights Scream 2009-07-03 . chapter 11
Damien is a merman? I wonder why they couldn't talk together then. Weird! I like that they can talk now. It's more interesting this way.
Midnights Scream 2009-07-03 . chapter 10
? Where did that come from?
Midnights Scream 2009-07-03 . chapter 9
YEAH! Angel has now been fed. the poor thing! :) great job! I like when Angel attaches himself to Damien like that. Very adorable!
Midnights Scream 2009-07-03 . chapter 8
AWH! Damien and Angel are forming a bond. cute!
Midnights Scream 2009-07-03 . chapter 5
I don't think Angel is a people eater. perhaps I'm wrong though.
Midnights Scream 2009-07-03 . chapter 4
It sounds like Damien isn't human either. I wonder what he is. Kevin is cute and it's cool that he can talk to Angel.lol. what is it with supernatural creatures and treasure? great job!
Midnights Scream 2009-07-03 . chapter 3
lol. Interesting! When you said kid I thought he'd be older, but he really is just a little kid. :) I like Angel already!
Lerene 2009-07-03 . chapter 12
great chapter

I remember a few chapters back Damien mention something about immortals which had me thinking he was a vampire, then the last chapter made it sound like he was a merman. Turns out I was right the first time.

And ah oh! Kevin's "Mom" might be the Siren. And oh no Damien getting bit, my guess is either it's the Siren or just Angel who scare from waking up by himself.
Lerene 2009-07-02 . chapter 11
Damien is a merman!?
toolazytosignin 2009-07-01 . chapter 11
chu!
i had a feeling he might be a merman fufufu
i can't wait for more!!
JtheChosen1 2009-07-01 . chapter 11
Wow...short, but sweet!
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