oh! scary...*Backs away from trisha* i loved the poem, very nice descriptions, even if they are a bit..umm...violent..

I think readers not even knowing the backstory can understand the kind of person this is written about. Gah. Kick him in the shins and tear out his spleen eh? I love the flow of this and the repetition of "firey red", awesome job,Trishy.

Wow!! Love this one!! Gah I hate him!!

That was awesome! So much passion! Excellent work! I've got to say, this is the most impressive poem I've every read from you--from line breaks to word use. Excellent! I loved every moment of it.