This is good. I like your poetry; it captures the every-day in a way I rarely see.
conversational tone, the arrogance of youth!
It's interesting poetry, which is difficult to accomplish, and rythmic in a way that shows guts and ability.

I really like it.

This line hit me the hardest "in a century, our voices will be gone for good".

Wow. And I own a thousand pens. And notebooks. It used to be/is an obsession.

An enrapturing piece. This speaks truth!
(I don't own a cell phone either.)

ha ha ha 'wtf are those?'
oh wow wow wow!! this was very good! This first paragraph doesn't seem to flow with the rest of it, but otherwise the snappy mood and the GREAT last two lines and the entire thing were greater than or equal to amazing!
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