Fantastic story! Loved it loved it loved it! It was great when Jared was giving his date relationship advice to make up with his ex. Really funny.

I loved the Spanish parts, the made it unique. And them watching Jared run around was just too funny.

Okay, I hate and I mean HATE Spanish, but I loved the way you used it. And I knew almost all of it.

It's adorable. I'm off to read the next part.

:')
That made me tear up. I LOVE how everything turns out. Oh my goodness.
:) awesome job!

OMG.
:D
I so totally understood the Spanish and OMG I'm so freaking happy for Toby and Jill. Jeez.
So sweet!

omg loved it!im speechless so all i can say was that it was great.

This IS pretty damn good fluff, I enjoyed it so much! And, YES, your penname does not show up that's why when you see it in my A/N, it's always big break and laryngitis without the dots!
Narq.

Aw! It was so sweet! A perfect Valentine 2-shot :)

Gup

you're right. this is some pretty damn good fluff. lol. anyways, awesome job. love it

AW! SO CUTE!

-toffeecakesxox.

O wow! That was really well done~ good job!! I can't wait for the next update!!
narq.

awesome. i like it. short and sweet. well done, and i can't wait for the second part!