This is definitely a favorite of mine. I love the darker themed poems and this one is no exception.

Beautiful. I love the short lines.

It was dark, but beautiful! I think all poetry can be a little dark, because it has to come from somewhere and usually we write to make ourselves feel better...Anyway nice poem!

I really like this one! I loved how the "kissing fate" thing was written! It was awesome! Keep writing! :D

I thought it was very good and heartfelt. But I did not understand Californian Mistress...care to elaborate?

This was a cute little poem. Good job. ^_^